Watching, Waiting

by Tess on December 11, 2007 · 3 comments

in Creativity,Poetry

Invitation to PoetryIt’s the last Poetry Party before Christmas, and Christine has created this mysterious image from photographs of her female ancestors.

Ancestors

Image by Christine Valters Painter, by permission

Here are the words that came to me from the image:

From clouded silence their
sharp eyes see too far. Judging.

Does death wipe out all the
mistakes those living eyes made?

Am I to be allowed no excuse
for my human inadequacies?

I will not wait for death to
give me frozen, far-seeing eyes.

I will rejoice in my stumbling
jerky progress, here, now.

I will hold high my lamp.
I will not be afraid. No!

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Maya December 11, 2007 at 4:41 pm

TESS! This poem gave me goosebumps! I loved the last two stanzas. Isn’t that the truth!

Abbey of the Arts December 11, 2007 at 5:23 pm

I love the movement of this poem Tess, it feels like a journey of ascent from the depths of sorrow and regret. Beautiful!

Tess December 11, 2007 at 6:18 pm

Maya, goosebumps, I’m honoured! There’s something important for me about light and lamps at the moment, and also the defiance of the word “No”, which I find too difficult to say.

Christine, thank you, and for your image which stirred something in me.

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